Once More Unto the Breach Dear Friends

I know some authors who pump out books like a Pez dispenser.  It seems just about once a month their releasing a new novel.  Don’t get me wrong, I don’t think there’s anything bad about this.  In fact, I applaud these authors and their ability to produce… it’s just not me.

Admittedly, there are few of my novels I completed quickly.  Sometimes that happens when working under a deadline.  But with my current novel, I have no deadline. I have been pouring over this thing, trying to get it absolutely perfect, for a LOOOOOONG time.  I’m not saying this is my last shot at making something of my writing “career” — I’m certainly not one to give up — but I’m throwing everything I’ve got into the ring this time, hoping to make something out of this glorified hobby I call writing.

That being said, I’ve had to halt querying on my most recent work because I know it can be better.  There are some things I need to add, some plot points that need brought out earlier than anticipated, some characterization that needs redefined.  So, it’s once more unto the breach dear friends.  I’m abandoning querying for now and I’m jumping back into editing this novel.

I don’t know if all this work will pay off.  Who knows if I’ll ever land an agent… but I’m going to give it all I’ve got.  I’m the type that would rather know they did absolutely everything they could do and sadly come up short, than live in the mediocre and constantly wonder “what if?”

Until next time friends… Happy Reading!


Query – The Writer’s Curse Word

What’s the worst thing about writing?  I guess that really depends on who you ask.

For some, it might be actually getting that first book on paper. Countless people set out to write a novel, but never actually finish.

Others might tell you it’s the editing process. After weeks, months, years of striving to get your brilliant novel idea on papers you joyously type the words “The End” only to realize the real work is just beginning.  Now you’ve got to sit down and slash that brilliant novel into thousand pieces and attempt to put it back together again.

For me, it’s querying. This devil’s invention basically combines everything I hate. At the top of that list: patience and in-your-face rejection. Here’s the basic recipe:

  • Boil down your 80,000 word novel to less than 300 words and still make it intriguing enough for an agent to want to read the whole story.  Oh, and don’t forget, in those 300 words you need to include basic facts about the novel (word count, genre, etc.) and your pertinent bio information.

  • Send your query to bunches of agents.  Only after making sure you’ve researched each agent’s specific likes, requirements, the name of their first pet, and favorite flavor of ice cream. This way you can send them exactly what they want in the precise way they want it.

  • Next you wait… wait… wait… wait… WAIT… to hear something, anything from said agents. Sometimes they don’t bother to reply.  And sometimes you get that all too familiar rejection letter.

  • Rinse and repeat… what fun!

It genuinely makes me want to beat my head off my desk.  Luckily most of my writing occurs on my couch with a laptop so my head remains dent free.

Admittedly, I’m no expert when it comes to querying. I queried my first novel, The Future Savior Series: Conception. What a disaster!  Thinking back, I realize I made just about every single mistake one could make with a query letter. It’s amazing that book was published at all.

This time I studied my butt off!  I’m as prepared as I can possibly be to query this new project.  I read every article about querying I could get my hands on. Advice from agents, authors, publishers. A lot of the advice was similar, some contradicted, but ultimately one thing rang true: Be as brief as possible!

Agents and publishers are some of the busiest people… ever. When they read queries they want to get to the point pronto. So, just like with your novel, you need to revise, revise, revise your query letter.

I have two words for you:  Query Shark

I can’t even begin to tell you how much this site helped me!  Before you send out your first query letter, you MUST go to Query Shark and read through the archives. There are almost 300 query letters on there that have been painstakingly critiqued by Janet Reid, one of the most respected agents in the business. She currently works at New Leaf Media by day and at night she is the Query Shark.

I spent HOURS going through the archives at Query Shark, revising my query. Is it perfect? Pshaw!!!  Writing is never prefect.  But I can confidently query knowing I did absolutely everything I could possibly do.

So, wish me luck as I start off on this querying adventure.  Fingers crossed I find an agent!  And let me know where you are in your writing adventure so I can wish you luck too!

Until next time friends… Happy Reading!


Finding the groove

Hey friends!

After a LONG hiatus… I’M BACK!  I won’t bore you with the 101 reasons I essentially vanished from the writing world, but know I wasn’t static.  I completed my latest novel and spent more hours than I care to share slicing and dicing that bad boy.  On the bright side, it’s just about ready to go.  Let the querying begin!

I will say that part of my vanishing act dealt with finding my groove.  Who the heck do I want to be as a writer.  I don’t know about anybody else, but I’ve got story ideas coming out of my eyeballs. For so long I battled against fitting in to a certain category. (Aside from the speculative genres.) But during my hiatus I realized I need focus.  Floundering in ideas with no general direction is a detriment to my wannabe career.

After so painstakingly working on my last book, literally giving it more than a year of my life, I realized where my focus needs to be.  MG and YA speculative stories. These are the stories I love to write. These are the books I love to read. This is where I need to hang my hat.

I certainly don’t regret my older stories.  Future Savior will always have a piece of my heart!  And I certainly enjoyed working with Hunter, Yas, and Ellie in the Fury books, but I’m a kid at heart… I’m pretty sure I never matured past 16!  I need to focus on writing and reading MG and YA stories. I’ve found my groove!

Until next time friends, Happy Reading!